Am I?
I thought that we'd be perfect,
But I don't think you can see
The insane amount of guilt
that lies deep inside of me.
My smile is a lie.
The pain I feel is real.
And I know you'll never understand
Just how you make me feel.
I'm screaming on the inside
Though docile on the out.
And I'll never really understand
Just why I'm full of doubt.
Your happiness is all I want
And I'm not sure if it's true,
But I feel you won't find happiness
As long as I'm with you.
So leave me if you must.
If it really would be best.
For I don't know just what to do
To put my mind at rest.
I don't feel I deserve you.
You're too good to be true.
I don't know what you see in me,
But what I see in you
Is a handsome boy who's full of dreams.
No talents do you lack.
And you don't need a girl like me
Who'll only hold you back.
I really want to be with you.
Have doubts that you agree,
But if you do, please ease my mind,
What do you see in me?
2007-04-25 13:15:45 · 11 answers · asked by blue_seal07 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
OMG, this a nice poem in the sense that it rhymes, but if you do this with each boy you like, you'll repeat this poem many times.
It is painful to read your words of pain and self-doubt. Be happy, enjoy what you have and let this boy keep taking you out.
Good luck to you. You and this boy found one another. Let him decide if he is happy with you before you push him away to another.
2007-04-25 13:22:49 · answer #1 · answered by Michael W 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is a very touching poem, feels very real and alive. You should not feel that someone is too good for you though.
2007-04-25 20:28:12 · answer #2 · answered by redd headd 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The best poems are inspired by lost love...I really liked your poem...it was alive and full of emotions...congrats!
2007-04-25 20:19:34 · answer #3 · answered by Aquamarine 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I enjoyed your poem TY so much Gbu
2007-04-25 20:19:23 · answer #4 · answered by christina 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You sound like you have low self- esteem.
2007-04-25 20:21:26 · answer #5 · answered by Kay F 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wonderful. i'm a poet too and that's real good. give it to the guy you like. ;]
2007-04-25 20:20:08 · answer #6 · answered by Samantha 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that was really good. Nice job...
2007-04-25 20:21:30 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem is good and i dont think you should give him up
2007-04-25 20:19:27 · answer #8 · answered by Sandy O 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love poetry. I think its amazing!!!
Can u email me somemore of your work?please?!
2007-04-25 20:18:48 · answer #9 · answered by guildguy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was really good! I loved it :)
2007-04-25 20:20:04 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋