Two friends, two hearts
joined together in friendship
united forever in love.
together with their families
Jane Doe
and
Jon Doe
invite you to share in the joy
and celebration of love
as they exchange marriage vows
on Saturday, the twentieth of October
at one o’clock in the afternoon
Blank Church
1701 Oleander Ave.
Your Town, New York
2007-04-25 08:33:04 · 15 answers · asked by ♥poppy honey♥ 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Weddings
your responses are great thanks.
I don't take offense to your opinions, why would I? I'm just happy I'm getting married!! ha ha
2007-04-25 08:45:39 · update #1
I took from a few samples I saw and modified it to my liking for those who have asked. ;)
2007-04-25 08:47:53 · update #2
at least i'm not serving pepsi in cups. ha ha. i love it.
2007-04-26 08:29:37 · update #3
Sounds sweet.
I like the "joined together in friendship, united forever in love" part, that is awesome.
Congratulations!
2007-04-25 08:38:21 · answer #1 · answered by greengo 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I would put "together with their families" under your two names. What you are saying is like inviting someone by saying your children and mr and mrs smith are invited...its awkward...also...
Two friends, Two hearts
Joined together in friendship,
united forever in love.
Jane Doe
and
John Smith
together with our families
invite you to share in the joy.....
I would put a space between the different elements of the invitation...the wording is very nice though.
2007-04-25 08:59:24 · answer #2 · answered by melouofs 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It sounds gorgeous. this first bit may favor tweaking somewhat. 'on as we talk, i will marry my chum the single I snort with, stay for, dream with, love...' It would not truly bypass with something of the invite. replacing from first man or woman and then touching on your self contained in the third. If it truly is from a poem then in case you upload in quotations and the author and e book or have it on the bottom of the invite. truly alluring tho.
2016-12-04 20:49:40 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all, let's hope you are not marrying a guy who is your relative with the same last name as you! It would be usual to include your middle names, as well.
Put the time first, then the date, but you forgot the YEAR - you need to put it into words "Two thousand and seven".
You also need to add the reception information in the lower left corner, flush left -
Cocktails 5:30 p.m.
Dinner 6:30 p.m.
Dance to follow
Donald Trump Ballroom
45 Main Street
Wherever, NY
2007-04-25 09:17:08 · answer #4 · answered by Lydia 7 · 0⤊ 3⤋
With the exception of the line "together with their families" that is exactly what I'm using! Great Choice!!
Congrats and Best Wishes!
2007-04-25 10:20:33 · answer #5 · answered by bg918 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds fine but you can't say 1:00- see example.
Saturday, the third of November
Two thousand and seven
at half after three o’clock in the afternoon.
And then you may want to add-
Reception to follow at
Banquet Hall on at la la land
2007-04-25 08:38:29 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋
It does imply that you are paying for the wedding yourself. As neither of your parents are hosting.
That is the case right?
They may be chipping in to help a bit, but if you are hosting it yourself and paying for most of it--then that is an excellent invite.
If your parents are paying a majority or the brides parents are paying for all of it, they would feel slighted by that invite.
But if you are, then its great!
("Together" [with their families] should be capitalized on the actual invite as it starts a new sentence.)
2007-04-25 09:10:06 · answer #7 · answered by phantom_of_valkyrie 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Sounds good! Congrats
2007-04-25 08:37:06 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds a little like something you might see on a tombstone. I don't mean that to sound ugly. It's just the first four lines that give that impression to me.
2007-04-25 09:58:57 · answer #9 · answered by orangeflameninja 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Awsome, That's really nice and very romantic.
2007-04-25 08:39:21 · answer #10 · answered by Sky Guy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋