Although some people that don’t understand and speak English are not really interested in the show, because they find it hard to understand the story its showing.
2007-04-23 00:32:16 · 8 answers · asked by merck 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
I have fixed it without trying to change your sentance too much! You just need to break it up into 2 sentances.
Some people that don’t understand and speak English are not really interested in the show. This is because they find it hard to understand the story it's showing.
2007-04-23 00:49:23 · answer #1 · answered by beanie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Some people don't understand or speak English, so they are not really interested in the show because they find it hard to understand the story.
2007-04-23 07:41:21 · answer #2 · answered by Ladyfromdrum 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Some people who don’t understand English are not really interested in the show, because they find it hard to understand it.
2007-04-23 07:37:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Some people that don't understand or speak English are not really interested in the show since they find it hard to understand the story it's showing.
It seems that you don't need the word "although" which expresses contrast, whereas you don't need it in your sentence.You should use affirmative sentence after the word english if you want to keep "although"
Good luck.
2007-04-23 07:46:48 · answer #4 · answered by benabidas 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Although the ones who neither comprehend nor speak English show no real interest in the show simply because they find the story hard to follow (or understand).
Hope it helps!
Take it easy!
2007-04-23 07:43:00 · answer #5 · answered by Devilish Angel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
People will find it hard to understand the English show for those who are not well introduced to the English language.
2007-04-23 07:42:13 · answer #6 · answered by red scar 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Some people who do not understand or speak English would not be interested in the show because they are unable to comprehend the story.
Do not use "although" unless you are comparing. Hope this helps
2007-04-23 07:56:59 · answer #7 · answered by Sandy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your question needs fixing too. It should be Can you try TO fix this sentence?
2007-04-23 07:43:00 · answer #8 · answered by thfcsydney 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋