Do you like this poem that I wrote?

Question

Honest answers please!!!



Seeing You


The rain is drowning,
Work was regrettable,
The car wouldn’t start,
Today is worth frowning.

Now walking home,
Rain dripping down my chin,
There is no one out,
I feel very alone.

Opening the door,
Soaked through and dripping,
Thinking how terrible today was,
Muddy shoes on the floor.

Then you step in,
Cheeks glowing walking to me,
Drying my hair with a towel,
You kiss me still smiling.

Accompanying you to the kitchen,
Rain still splashing outside,
Handing me a cup of hot cocoa,
Then you ask and want to listen.

How was your day?
Looking at you forgetting everything,
Knowing you love me,
Not lying I had a perfect day.

Answer 1

You call that hodgepodge poetry?
It makes no sense, as I can see
No rhyme scheme, and no meter, too;
All mixed together like a stew.
Some lines are short and some are long:
To call this poetry is wrong.
It's just a story, nothing more,
But you have made it more a chore
By ending arbitrarily
Where each line ends; I cannot see
A reason for your choosing why.
You asked for help, so I won't lie.

Answer 2

Ita kind of romantic and sweet,not bad.

Answer 3

I love it!! What a beautiful way to tell your someone special you love them.... great job!!

Answer 4

That is a great poem,I see your keepin up the gentleman that you are:)

Answer 5

great go one and write the next

Answer 6

Very sincere and lovely!

Answer 7

I love it - well written

Answer 8

wow...that's really good....i like it:)
its sweet.

Answer 9

awwwwwwww i like it a lot... : )

Answer 10

awww that is beautiful!!!!!