A 7. Like the part when you compare him to the sky.
DAYS LIKE THIS
YOU, AND
YOUR FACE
CLOUD MY
MIND...
Keep busting poetry, girl. Peace!
2007-04-22 07:31:59
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answer #1
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answered by Drivliam 6
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I assume you're not expecting anything other than a 1. honestly, it's very tired, and only a few key words would have to be changed to make it a different poem.
2007-04-22 14:32:06
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answer #2
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answered by Anonymous
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I must say, too many "day's like this"'s
i'd give it a 7.8
put a break in between the last 2 words of poem
2007-04-22 14:31:34
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answer #3
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answered by hiimpaul 2
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9.99 out of 10.
I think it's about your boyfriend.
It's really annoying how the lines are broken up so much.
Enter it in the American Idol songwriting contest. Oh, whoops, that already closed. Well, you can try again next year.
2007-04-22 14:30:56
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answer #4
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answered by blopop 4
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I like it and would say an 8. It could be about a loved on who is no longer here or a partner or someone you like.
2007-04-22 14:30:35
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answer #5
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answered by Kerrybobs 3
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Polls and Surveys is not the best place to post a poem. 7.
2007-04-22 14:30:49
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answer #6
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answered by Anonymous
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I think that on a scale from 1 to 10, it's a 1, I don't know nor care who this is about....it SUCKS!!!!!!!
2007-04-22 14:31:53
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answer #7
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answered by bobemac 7
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I'd say a 4, because it does not have much flow, and it is very repetitive. It is probably about a significant other.
2007-04-22 14:30:43
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answer #8
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answered by dreamsncrystalvisions 4
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10/10 i think its a poem
2007-04-22 14:30:03
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answered by Marnett Z 2
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I'd give you 5 and I think it's about your love.
2007-04-22 14:31:05
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answered by ilzjux 5
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