What do you think my poem is about? What do you think about it??

Question

Sweet lovely lymph liquid from your swollen mind.
I tressure it in of side my self. Hideing it form the enebitable declay. I wanna hold it tight. Tighter and tighter until i see blood, but its too hard. I cant breath it tracks me down. It smells like dead. A river of declayed blood. Which flows to the rithim of his heart rate. It leads to the darkest place which is almost every wear. Its where every thing is posible. The worse sins you'll see. The best pleshures youll feel, the number of the beast you'll wear for 7 ******* years. Everything backwards it is the anticriste you'll meet ,but then he'll come again ,and the skies will be red. The earth is dead, and he'll rise again. Were all doomed to hell.

i know my spelling is Sh*t
i suck at that =)

Answer 1

It is like you are talking about cancer
Doom and death
Don't know what to think of it.
Sky

Answer 2

I think you have a great grasp of descriptive language, although you need to work on your spelling. It's deplorable--no offense. (I am an English teacher..I have to comment on that.)

I think your poem is about the end of the world..no?

Answer 3

It's about your heart. The poem is very dark and very good use of language. Oh, and check your spelling.

Answer 4

besides the fact that your spelling is atrocious, it isn't a poem of any kind. It is just a bunch of rambling words that make no sense at all.

Answer 5

Man. I'm hungry

Answer 6

pish

Answer 7

it sucks

Answer 8

your mom

Answer 9

giant pimples..?

Answer 10

different