Are We Ment To Be???
I don't no what to do (do)
Your always on my mind (mind)
Can't stop thinkinf of you,
who,who, baby Why?
You always on my mind (mind)
when i look up yo the sky! (high) baby, we,
Are ment to be,
Just you anc me,
together , we'll see.
What is in front of us (us)
Maybe get run-over by a bus (bus)
I don't understand?
Why your still on my mind?
I see it in your eyes (eyes)
We are ment to be.You and me baby!
Please Remember???
Please remember,
How we laughed, How we cried,
How this world was yours and mine?
And how no dream was out of reach,
I stood by you, you stood by me.
We took each day and made it shine,
We wrote our names across the sky,
We ran so fast, we ran so free,
I had you,you had me,
Please remember
i hope u like i'm only 16 years old lol
2007-04-20 23:17:43 · 19 answers · asked by amy_baby123 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
nice, im guessing based on someone who u been thru a lot wit, am i right? the bus thing ain't great, but the rest WOW
2007-04-24 05:22:49 · answer #1 · answered by De'Latte 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
for a 16 year old i think u got talent, egnore the people who say its not good,i bet ur good at singing aswell, usually a person who can think up a song is talented at singing.only critisism, the bus bit, change is its cheesy and doesnt fit in
2007-04-20 23:26:24 · answer #2 · answered by joel g 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fantastic keep it up, only criticism is the line about the bus didn't work for me, it might be different if i heard music along to it. I like how you don't feel the need to rhyme every last word. Keep up the good work!
2007-04-20 23:23:48 · answer #3 · answered by big babs 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its awesum, god u mustve been thru a lot. i went thru the same thing, but the guy didnt like me. i also used to write songs about that - ive got a buk ful of em! anyway, at least urs r beta than mine lol. writin's defo the best way 2 get rid of ur emotions! keep writin, lol!
2007-04-21 10:23:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
your a year older since the last question dont like the song sweetheart xx
2007-04-21 01:09:20 · answer #5 · answered by dream theatre 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
weren't you 15 in your last question?
Also, did you steal these lyircs from LeAnn Rimes? She'll be very pissed when she finds out. Not to mention her lawyers.
2007-04-20 23:19:53 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 1⤋
yep i noticed 15 last time lol
2007-04-20 23:21:24 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it ok
2 points to me yipppeeeee!
2007-04-24 12:08:57 · answer #8 · answered by Sim 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
here is my song
lier lier bums on fire
you were fifteen in your last question
and now
and now
your sixteen
sweet sixteen
lol
2007-04-21 00:51:15 · answer #9 · answered by lady z 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ahhhhhhhhhhh its lovely!
2007-04-23 04:56:31 · answer #10 · answered by bevalou 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋