They had been together for many a year,
Now, all she could feel was fear.
She gave all that she could give,
It just wasn't the way she wanted to live.
He left without a backward glance,
Not even giving their love a chance.
She often wonders what she could have done,
To keep him from going on the run.
Now she is living all alone,
With nothing to call her own.
She can barely make herself eat,
Wondering if her life will ever again be complete.
While time had pass
This woman is now moving along,
Building her courage, and becoming strong.
Time will heel her broken pride,
Toward the sunset her heart will glide.
Whiel time passed she realize.
she does not need a man like that
So without a tear
She moved on and said " I'm done with all that "
2007-04-19 10:26:58 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
That is so sad, brilliant and nice. I love it well done!!!!!!
My review of this poem:
This poem shows a man leaving a women at first shes afraid but in the end she finds she can find someone else.
It fills you with sadness but you fall in love with the story. The ending is filled with joy as she moves on 10 OUT OF 10.
2007-04-19 10:33:23 · answer #1 · answered by UnP0ssible 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a word was spelled wrong.
the poem seems to fortify the idea of female strength and demonstrates an ideal characteristic or you or what you would like to pursure. i'd give about a 8/10.
2007-04-19 10:31:49 · answer #2 · answered by Haikin L 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. I love the ending, when she finds strength and meaning to begin again. Always remember only the strong survive and strength is born from pain and heartache.
2007-04-19 12:14:40 · answer #3 · answered by .......... 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good my dear ! But you need not fear,your sorrow will pass and soon your mind will be clear. "Time heals even the broken heart. Lonewolf
2007-04-19 10:47:39 · answer #4 · answered by lonewolf 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful story in the poem,needs more poemy words, kind of poem that guys dont care aout and also the kind girls feel good about
2007-04-19 10:30:25 · answer #5 · answered by liz s 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AMAZING HONEY! If thats about you, then great work hun, more power to you! Don't ever throw your pearls at swine ever again! Good on you sister!!!!
2007-04-19 10:36:17 · answer #6 · answered by Purity 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I personally think its pretty awsome! Even though it dosn't have "poemy" words. Still good.
2007-04-19 10:31:38 · answer #7 · answered by Shelly C. 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Inspireing...but the last few lines don't rhyme...that and that are the same word and realize and tear don't rhyme at all, try despise, maximize, idealize, dies, cries, eyes, lies, skies and for that try...http://www.rhymezone.com they rhyme words for you...
2007-04-19 10:33:43 · answer #8 · answered by not telling you!!! 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hope you have the will to live out the end of you lovely poem. hope writing poetry doesn't just get it out of your system and you return to hell.
2007-04-19 10:31:10 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
brought back some memories of past
2007-04-19 10:31:41 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋