Look at all this pain you've caused, look at how I really feel.
How can you say you really love me,
when the scars you've given me will never heal?
It's hard to belive all those things you say,
because I remember the lies you've told me everyday.
It's hard to belive such a liar,
just look into my eyes...they're burning in fire.
Now I hope you realize what you've done,
because your time with me has come and gone.
If you want me back, do as you may,
But next time, please have something truthful to say...
Oh yea I'm almost 13! :]
2007-04-18 16:16:40 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
You have no idea what pain and suffering is. Do YOU have to pay taxes lol
2007-04-18 16:19:21 · answer #1 · answered by 2d 2 · 5⤊ 0⤋
It reveals a great deal of pain over a lie. I think it is honest and meaningful. Writing is a good way to heal.
2007-04-18 23:22:52 · answer #2 · answered by Kimberly 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ummm...... very blunt and dumb. I don't care that somebody lied to you and it hurt. People lie no matter what get over it.
Oh this is next time by the way. Truthful enough for you.
2007-04-18 23:22:20 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pretty cool. Try using your talent writing something fun and/or happy.
2007-04-18 23:21:28 · answer #4 · answered by Dogness 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very good..Surprised at your age too..You should enter it into a Poetry contest.. best luck.
2007-04-18 23:25:17 · answer #5 · answered by That Girl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem, but LMAO at Sora
2007-04-18 23:23:03 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm 57
were we dating the same guy?
2007-04-18 23:21:27 · answer #7 · answered by diannegoodwin@sbcglobal.net 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice!
2007-04-18 23:19:27 · answer #8 · answered by Bren 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
cool love it do more
2007-04-18 23:19:38 · answer #9 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i liked it! it was really good! was it about him? im so sorry! :(
2007-04-19 17:29:52 · answer #10 · answered by britt superhero 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋