I've already did poetry.com
2007-04-18 03:21:11 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
A touch of your skin on mine
A brush of our lips as they touch
A look into your eyes
A smile completes the rush
A touch on my waist
The close of a moments kiss
To open my eyes and see the only theing that matters
It's how I describe my heavenly bliss
Arms wrapped around me
My head lies on your chest
Hearing the breath escape our lips
This is how it must feel to be perfectly at rest
2007-04-18 03:26:40 · update #1
Hey Save P&S…,
Below is a list of poetry sites. Some you can look for appropriate poems, and many of them have forums.
2007-04-18 03:47:39 · answer #1 · answered by BuyTheSeaProperty 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
right here is as good as any.than again you are still running the risk of hearing some true feedback
2007-04-18 10:24:35 · answer #2 · answered by Pocahontas 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
www.poemranker.com Other poets will read and rate your work. They can be harsh, but its educational
2007-04-18 10:25:54 · answer #3 · answered by alex p 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋