Would someone speak good english please proofread this statement? Thank you.?

Question

"Before Foundation year, I had this habit of destroying my artworks which I despise. Now I do not do that any longer, having learnt that what I considered as bad could be a masterpiece in others’ eyes."

Will you my fellow friends please proof-read this statement? My english isn't very good. I really appreciate it.

Thank you in advance.

FOUNDATION YEAR is the first year in my art school. we're doing this statement for a foundation show.
THANK YOU SOO MUCH, GUYS!

Answer 1

learnt i don't think is a real word try using learned

Answer 2

Here goes:(I made the corrections in parentheses)

"Before Foundation year, I had this habit of destroying my (artwork,) which I despise. Now(,) I do not do that any longer, having (learned) that what I (consider) as bad could be a masterpiece in (another’s) eyes."

I do not know what Foundation year is, but it might need to be "The Foundation" or 'Foundation Year'(with year capitalized.), or "the year of the foundation.

Answer 3

Before Foundation year, I had a habit of destroying the artworks that I despised. I don't do that anymore because I learned that what I considered bad, could be a masterpiece in the eyes' of others.

Answer 4

I don't know what the foundation year means but this is a bit easier wording.

" Before Foundation Year, If I did not like a piece of my artwork I would destroy it. Since then, I have learned that even tho I despised the piece , it could be considered a masterpiece in someone else's eyes, so I no longer do that."

Answer 5

"Before The Foundation year, I had this habit of destroying my artworks, which I despised. I do not do that any longer, having learned that what I consider as bad as could be, can be a masterpiece in other eyes."

Hope I could help =]

Answer 6

"Before Foundation Year, I had a habit of destroying my artwork that I disliked. Now I do not do that any more, because I learned that something I might consider bad may be a masterpiece in another's eyes."

:)

i didnt know what you meant by foundation year, either keep it like that or say "the year of foundation"

Answer 7

"Before Foundation year, I had this habit of destroying my artworks which I despise. Now I do not do that any longer, having learnt that what I considered bad could be a masterpiece in others’ eyes."

good.

Answer 8

I'm not sure what foundation year is....something like this maybe ok.

At one time I had a habit of destroying the artworks I created, that I didn't like or considered of little value or unsuccessful art. Since Foundation Year, I have learned that all art has value and what I once considered as unsuccessful could be seen as a masterpiece in others' eyes. I have since lost that habit and value all the work I create.

Answer 9

Before my Foundation year, I had this habit of destroying any of my artworks which I did not particularly like. Now I do not do that any more as I have learned that those I considered to be unworthy might possibly be considered a masterpiece in another's eyes.

Answer 10

Ok my punctuation is not that good. But it's cool can't be great at everything. My english teacher told me great writer bad punctuator. Here goes:


Before "Foundation Year" I had a habit of destroying my artwork which I despised. I have learned what I consider bad could actually be a masterpiece.

Answer 11

No capital on foundation unless it's the name of a place. It suggests that you despise your artwork. Should it suggest that you despise your habit of destroying it instead? "Now, I don't do that. I have learned that what I considered to be bad, could be a masterpiece in the eyes of others."