You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
I'll learn your inner beauty
On the net when we chat
And know as you type
That my heart's where you're at
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
2007-04-13 08:22:40 · 11 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
really nice! i wish someone will write me something like that!
2007-04-13 08:28:04 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it ur a really great poet keep it up maybe u should give it to some one u really care about it would help expalin it a lot i lould love it if a guy like that would write me something like that
2007-04-13 15:28:39 · answer #2 · answered by Cassie C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww how sweet, sounds how I feeel about a guy I like ,wow she'll like it =D
2007-04-13 15:34:58 · answer #3 · answered by *sapphire* 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Okay...that's really sweet! Seriously! Very romantic and well written...sigh...that is going to be one lucky girl!
2007-04-13 15:26:39 · answer #4 · answered by samantha 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too cheesy for my taste... But, I know any other girl would probably melt for you ..... You will definitely get laid when you present that...
2007-04-13 15:27:53 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats lush
2007-04-16 05:04:50 · answer #6 · answered by amy_baby123 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's so sweet I think who ever you like they would like that poem.
2007-04-14 21:20:14 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats really good,
did u write that ?
2007-04-13 15:27:33 · answer #8 · answered by R2008 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AwS! tHaT iS So CuTe!
2007-04-13 15:38:03 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i read it
2007-04-13 15:26:37 · answer #10 · answered by BiG Stylin 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋