You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
I'll learn your inner beauty
On the net when we chat
And know as you type
That my heart's where you're at
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
2007-04-13 02:41:24 · 25 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
great poem
2007-04-13 02:44:11 · answer #1 · answered by Emiline 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dang, that was a really good poem. You reli know how to get a girls attention.. it's reli sweet. It's really really good. With that poem and attitude.. ur someday might not be that far away...... props on the poem again. It shows a sensitive side.... caring too - i know slightly oprah.. but girls do like that, well some girls do. Good luk
2007-04-13 02:48:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was actually really nice and sweet. I'm sure the girl your sending this to is really gonna appreciate that. Well you stole my heart at least!!! NICE
2007-04-13 02:47:03 · answer #3 · answered by imari104012000 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow.... You are going to make someone very very happy someday aren't you? That's a beautiful poem.
2007-04-13 02:46:18 · answer #4 · answered by anastasia 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is amazing! You really have talent! With that poem you will knock the socks off any girl!
2007-04-13 02:47:26 · answer #5 · answered by Nadz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awww. that is so filled with love. i hope you do find her one day.... considering the fact that you're already writing her poetry, she's gonna be one lucky gal. just remember the love and beauty that you posess inside for her now you should give her always.
2007-04-13 02:54:31 · answer #6 · answered by kelly r 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awww, that was a great poem. I'm sure the lucky girl will love it!
2007-04-13 02:50:42 · answer #7 · answered by scarab_babe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
fantastic,that was so pleasing,if u wud use this to prpose me i no wonder wud refuse,i mite even leave my present boyfrnd...u surely know how to take girls heart away.......it tempted me to read on on and on,superb awesome,lovely.very nice to read and enjoyable.for a min u made me forget my griefs
2007-04-13 02:58:19 · answer #8 · answered by brokenheart 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is a great poem! it is not as deep as shakespear but the gist is same as his. im sure whoever read this poem would surely melt..is it a cyber love?
2007-04-13 02:53:29 · answer #9 · answered by glam gail 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, very nice but contradictory
2007-04-13 02:46:36 · answer #10 · answered by rellenk 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow that is so nice i wise my boi friend would rite me something like that but different types of guys do different type of things.i think she gonna be very happy with it.
2007-04-13 02:49:53 · answer #11 · answered by angelapuppylove 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋