FORGETING U
forgeting your walk
mabey if we talk
forgeting your "hello"
who knows?
forgeting wat you used to say
someday
forgeting your eyes
why not try?
forgeting your smile
well...that might take a while
forgeting your tucch
now thats asking to much!
forgeting that special day
mabey i should stay away
forgeting your kiss
thats just a wish
forgeting u
thast the hardest thing ive ever had to do
2007-04-10 16:55:19 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Omg That was so touching, I LOVE THIS POEM!! U r really good...this so hits me on every level with the guys ive been through!
*Much Love* **God Bless**
2007-04-10 17:04:03 · answer #1 · answered by Tell Mariee 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
we've not have been given any thought what undertaking has led to this... and that doesn't count. This poem is regarding the sensation, not the circumstances. that's the genius of the poem. There are 3 traces that stand out. The final line of direction, this is the entire factor of the poem. "Who is conscious what the destiny brings." It feels stale and clunky. ultimately there is "summer season only mendacity in wait." Wow! Pow! that's so efficient and evocative. reliable artwork!
2016-10-28 09:54:35 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that that is a very interesting poem. I happen to like it. Some might, others may not. However I admire that you gave it a go.
2007-04-10 17:04:31 · answer #3 · answered by Jarod R 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh my gosh that was so beautiful i cant even write something like that dang that poem could be like a famous poem.
2007-04-10 17:04:53 · answer #4 · answered by Natasha C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty Good...but a tip:
Learn to spell, or at the least spell out everything, Stop using the foolish abbreviations and 'cute' spellings such as: u, wat, and mabey.
People will take you and your poems more seriously, and they will be able to better read them.
2007-04-10 17:02:27 · answer #5 · answered by Jake Uden 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's great. < Sobs > . Check the spelling, other than that you have a great poem . < Sobs more >
2007-04-10 17:01:25 · answer #6 · answered by Achilles 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a really nice poem it shows your true feelings in it comes from your heart......
2007-04-10 17:01:54 · answer #7 · answered by badgirlforlife007 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh god.
*calls the grammar police*
2007-04-10 16:58:57 · answer #8 · answered by Alex 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good. You need to spell check and check your punctuation.
2007-04-10 16:59:51 · answer #9 · answered by seaangell304 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good poem, a few spelling errors but good!
2007-04-10 17:04:46 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋