What do u think of this poem?

Question

I want to know what you all think about this poem. Do you think it's good??

You told me once that you'd been hurt.
That made me think you'd do that to me never.

I soon found out that pain was coming my way.
You played me like an act in a play.

You acted as if nothing was wrong,
but in reality everything was torn.

When you choose to cheat, you choose to be the one to hurt me most.

Three years passed and soon we talk.
You tell me that you have something to say.

You tell me you could not go on this way.
The words i never thought i would ever hear you say, came out of your mouth that very day.

You said you're sorry please forgive i understand if you say no.

I sat there thinking that very day, that what does it matter if i say no.
Our relationship is ruined and i'm sure i'll see you never.

i'm not asking u to help me get over him. i'm asking u what u think about the poem. i'm trying to be a better writer i'm writing about my past and how i felt. i don't even like him anymore!!!

and brian you used too many big words for me to even understand what u said. sorry

this is my first poem i've ever wrote so sorry if it's bad.

Answer 1

It's nice, and really sad! I like it.

Answer 2

Keeping it real... not very good. The grammar is poor, and the language is uncreative (e.g. "you played me like an act in a play"). It doesn't conjure up any special images in my mind. Good poetry typically involves a substantial time investment. I am confident that you can do better if you work on it.

Answer 3

its an awesome poem. i like it . if you wrote it yourself then you get a good job badge from me. nice

Answer 4

its ok but why would u write a poem about this..just tell the person straight up

Answer 5

It's very depressing. Get over it n move on!!!!!!

Answer 6

good i do like it