Y0ur W0ns 0v Th0se Friiends That ii Treasure .. Thiis Friiendshiip will go on f0r ever && ever .. Neither 0f us Are perfect But Thiis Friiendshiip Still liies Untouched .. Late night calls && all tho0se laughs N0t being friiends wif y0u would jst be daft ! .. S0me things Have Changed Sum Stayin the same Buh Where We are iis like a hidden treasure Thats Why ii saii .. Friiends F0rever <3
2007-04-09 05:36:16 · 18 answers · asked by hayliielouiisex 1 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
The poem 2
Your spelling 1
(a first grader's grammer is better than this!)
2007-04-09 05:39:50 · answer #1 · answered by Brown-Eyed-Beauty 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like the lack of grammar in this piece 9 from me. everyone else seems to think you need to have perfect grammar. i doubt they realize that using odd grammar and spelling will shine out from other poems so your work wont blend in, many famous poets write without grammar and have become rich because of it. i also love how you describe your friendship!
Keep Writing!!
2007-04-09 08:43:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
-5. I can hardly read it. Try speaking in correct English and maybe you'd get a 4-5
2007-04-09 05:39:13 · answer #3 · answered by F1reflyfan 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i've seen retarded cats with no eyes or limbs that don't actually exist in this, or any alternative, universes write better poems than this. i would probably do as you said and rate it 1 minus 10.
2007-04-09 21:57:21 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i rate it a 6
2007-04-09 05:40:11 · answer #5 · answered by angeleyes0480 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i admire Twilight and all, yet for a poem and the assumption of it; it merits a 0 because of the fact it has no actual topic to it, no physique shape and the grammar/spelling is erroneous.
2016-10-28 06:32:02 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry but around 1 or 2 I cant read it and it doesn't really make sense. Better luck next time...
P.S. Learn how to spell!!!
2007-04-09 09:14:08 · answer #7 · answered by prettypixie902 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well i rate the poem a 0 because it sucked. i rate your grammer and spelling a -10000000. go to a doctor i think you may be mentally retarded
2007-04-11 11:00:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, poem 2, grammar -10
By the way, the correct spelling of "peom" is "poem". :)
2007-04-09 05:56:41 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
10 It's a good poem.
2007-04-09 07:49:53 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋