This is the second poem that I was talking about..once again please dont be offended by this its just my life..
Give Me Help:
Each day I sit here depressed
The urge to cut
Is still not at rest
I begin to wonder
if my life is set in hell
can you please help me
will you tell?
This is not a secret
it is something in regret
I feel like I have failed
what do I get?
a slap in the face and a punch in the ribs
will not give me those wonderful days
that you all seem to forget
when I fight my way out
of this mental illness
I will find others to help
not like what you did
thanks for the bruise
it has healed with a little booze
this pain is not erasable
it is only dead to you
do you think it is good?
2007-04-08 13:19:53 · 4 answers · asked by just_like_you132 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I understand what you are saying Little Miss Laci Pants and I am getting help right now. not by a proffessional but by a great friend. she helps me through everything but thank you for you concern
2007-04-08 13:48:46 · update #1
Neb.A - actually that wasnt sarcasm. someone pinched me so hard that i got a bruise and a couple of hours later I drank a lot. not a good idea but thank you for your answer..and little miss laci was someone else not a part of my poem =]
2007-04-09 03:58:10 · update #2
Whether it's good or not really isn't important. Self-expression is vital; I'm glad that you've found a way to get your thoughts out of your head and into a form that you can deal with. Doing that can get you through some tough times without losing your head. Keep writing!
2007-04-08 13:55:13 · answer #1 · answered by Drew 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol. . . . . Little Miss Laci?? sure. . . quite creative title!
well. . . . nice poem. I like the sarcasm in
I will find others to help
not like what you did
thanks for the bruise
it has healed with a little booze
yes, pour it all out in poetry. . . . the genre is therapeutic too.
If "you" of the poem is still forgetful and unfeeling, tell them to go watch Misery. . . . . I mean the movie!!
2007-04-09 06:36:07 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, your poem is good, it is just sad. Poems express feelings, and you seem to have those. I do hope you are getting some help. God Bless you on this Easter.
2007-04-08 20:24:30 · answer #3 · answered by Mittys Momma 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I am more concerned at the , "Its just my life part" If this is your life I sincerely hope you can find an adult to help you with this.
2007-04-08 20:44:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋