down to the time when we are eating and playing..laughing on man that wa s great. do then we will be one and forever aiwhith time will sing. one day th toootsie roll man will forever be rejoyced and santa will play all day.to then is time to sing and rejoyce. oy chicldren of the time chileren of tthen, will sing and rejoyce oh yeah. fore girls and boys will fofrfever be happyey. why must bwe be sad. together we will rejoyce. take our sandness and be done, forever take our wekaness and be one. oh rejoyce?
2007-04-05 15:39:07 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Not to put too fine a point on it, it's crap. You didn't even bother to spell check your little ditty, your English comprehension is that of an 10 year old (I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt here), and don't blame me, you asked, I answered honestly. I'd think twice about submitting this to Esquire, okay?
2007-04-05 15:44:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Good poem if spell check had been used. Just remember to use it next time.
2007-04-05 15:43:18 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I did not understand it because the spelling was horrible,
you should check your spelling and then repost it.
2007-04-05 15:44:14 · answer #3 · answered by coolcat987 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Really bad. Sorry.
2007-04-05 15:42:44 · answer #4 · answered by the Boss 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not in poetic form
but ok
2007-04-05 15:44:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋