Do i make myself clear enough while talking like this?

Question

"What? His plan?! That thing will neve correspond to anything!"

If i talk in this way, can you really grasp what i am saying? Thanks!

Yes, but what are your alternatives?
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Thanks for your answer. But what do you mean by alternative? Do you mean what "my plan" is? I really don't understand.

Actually "that thing" here i meant "his plan". And the emphasis in the sentence (what i was confused) is the phrase "correspond to". i'll pay more attention next time.

Thanks, Ms. supersonic, i got it now.

The same thanks go to Goddess, you are so nice! Your idea is extremely vital to me and my future learning. THANKS AGAIN!

Answer 1

Not entirely clear, no.

Is "that thing" his plan? I wouldn't usually think of a plan as a "thing". I'd just say "that". Unless by "plan" you mean "map"? Or some other physical object. In that case, "correspond" makes sense, otherwise I think maybe "come to anything" or (slangily) "will never fly!" or just "will never work" or "is completely unrealistic".
Neve--I assume you mean never?

Answer 2

Yes, but what are your alternatives?

I meant the alternatives to your phrase
=== Do you have a different way to say --"What? His plan?! That thing will neve correspond to anything!"--?
=== You have to be specific.