"I bet you wildly underestimate the extent to which I adore Bright Eyes."
Gramatically.
And if not could you tell me how to alter it?
2007-04-02 14:24:04 · 20 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Bright Eyes are a band that have captured my imagination since I was 13.
2007-04-02 14:29:43 · update #1
please do not answer this question unless you are going to say something of relevance. if you dont understand it answer a differnt question you deela.
2007-04-02 14:34:43 · update #2
Why are you capitalizing Bright Eyes? Is that someone's name? If not, then don't capitalize.
Is this to a friend?
If not, then say 'grossly' underestimate--wildly kinda doesn't go.
2007-04-02 14:28:11 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I bet you that you wildly underestimate the extent to which I adore Bright Eyes. I like it like that better but when I put that sentence on word there were no grammar problems.
2007-04-02 14:30:11 · answer #2 · answered by bloodmoneygreed is back! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your perception wildly underestimates the extent to which I adore bright eyes.
2007-04-02 14:32:00 · answer #3 · answered by Corey R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It makes sense. Wildly is not needed, though. If you removed "wildly" you would get the same effect. If Bright Eyes is a movie or a title it's fine just the way it is.
2007-04-02 14:28:45 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have problems with the wildly part but without it, the impact is lessened.
There's a subtle difference in what we can get away with in spoken or written structure. If it's written how about,
You would have to scour the depths of your imagination to fathom my adoration of 'Bright Eyes'.
2007-04-02 14:53:30 · answer #5 · answered by Caretaker 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If Bright Eyes is a music band, then it should be Bright Eyes is a band, not Bright Eyes are a band.
But the sentence ur asking me to scrutinize is totally acceptable
2007-04-02 14:32:12 · answer #6 · answered by chocolate_sateen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OK.
You have mispelled "sentence" and "sense".
If Bright Eyes is a proper name then you are right.
If it's a title, then proper English would suggest that you put it
into quotation marks.
But, and you should never begin a sentence with a conjunctive, who cares very much?
The sentEnce makes quite good senSe without any alteration.
2007-04-02 14:42:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It makes sense, but you could simplify the sentence with one of these:
"It is extremely difficult to get across how much I adore Bright Eyes."
"I doubt you could understand how much I adore Bright Eyes."
2007-04-02 14:45:49 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It is grammatically correct assuming that "Bright Eyes" is a proper name of someone or something.
(Your question itself, however, is flawed by misspellings: Sentance, sence, gramatically -- they should be sentence, sense, and grammatically.)
2007-04-02 14:27:34 · answer #9 · answered by idiot detector 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't get the "Bright Eyes" part. why are those words capitolized? Otherwise, it seems fine to me.
2007-04-02 14:28:24 · answer #10 · answered by klg2k2002 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋