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You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday

I would like to chat on yahoo IM with any girl who likes my poem (or add me to your buddy list)

2007-03-28 09:46:45 · 6 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

6 answers

This is a beautiful poem. I hope that you find your true love and write her another one for her eyes only.

2007-03-28 09:59:07 · answer #1 · answered by reddchilds 5 · 0 0

It is a beautiful poem. I am too old to be considered a girl, but I am sure there are many out there who would like to chat with you. Good luck.

2007-03-28 16:52:45 · answer #2 · answered by Patti C 7 · 0 0

ur poem is really sweet.....u should save it for a girl u really and truely love. thats who will appreciate it the most not some random girl off of yahoo

2007-03-28 16:51:44 · answer #3 · answered by Mandie K. 3 · 0 0

That "playing with children" line seems a bit out of place, but otherwise, it's OK — IF you're a romantic, which I'm not.

2007-03-28 16:50:07 · answer #4 · answered by Rio Madeira 7 · 0 0

i like it, but l only have aol IM...sorry

2007-03-28 16:49:55 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

i don't have IM but i LOVE the poem!!!!!!!!!!!

2007-03-28 16:56:01 · answer #6 · answered by Tawddie 2 · 0 0

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