You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
I would like to chat on yahoo IM with any girl who likes my poem (or add me to your buddy list)
2007-03-28 07:42:27 · 31 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Do you really think just some random poem is gonna land you an online date? How bout get out there and meet some people?
2007-03-28 07:45:48 · answer #1 · answered by Gravity 4 · 3⤊ 2⤋
Any poetry from a guy is a big step, even if it is a very simple form and rhyme structure. If it is just a gimic to get chicks then it is pretty sleazy and will not work in the end.
Also, meeting chicks online is not a good idea. The fact that you are trying to do it shows that you cannot meet people in real life. That is weird... what is the deal. Meet someone at school or someone you work with. Chatting online with random people is not the way to go.
2007-03-28 14:48:46 · answer #2 · answered by blameless7 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's sweet....but you're going about this all the wrong way! Someone is not going to like you just because they enjoyed your poem. And honestly, I don't think you'd want to hook up with somebody off of the internet, do you? Have a little more confidence in yourself and approach this differently. Girls don't like desperate!
2007-03-28 14:50:18 · answer #3 · answered by Punkie Brewster 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Seriously... Lance Bass? wow, sounds like a high schooler wrote this... or a gay man... I don't know, it honestly made me feel nothing....
Weeded
I just wanted to be needed
Bleed me
Death lives inside and wants to feed me
In your eyes
Reflecting silence
Like a mirror portray the violence
Disappointments like the rain, fall
Collecting high
Going AWOL
Love will prevail
We'll see her tears under the black veil
Who's to say what's wrong or right
There is no black there is no white
Make these mistakes for me
Red passages
Icing me
Create the illusion of perfection
Recite me
As if my words were made of gold
Entice me
Put something good in this reflection
Excite me
As if this world were never sold
Just like a fairy tale untold
I just want something real to hold
Make these mistakes for me
Red passages
2007-03-28 14:47:18 · answer #4 · answered by Deformation Age 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I love your poem. It is very romantic.
However I can't chat with you for 2 reasons, I am too old and I'm married.
2007-03-28 14:48:09 · answer #5 · answered by tracy.austin 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow that is great. At the beginning it seemed like you loved someone so much but then I kept reading and came to find out you haven't found her yet. Awesome.
2007-03-28 14:46:55 · answer #6 · answered by Gin 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
You have made me cry almost. I am too old for you but I have a 21 year old daughter who is student teaching if you are interested you romantic devil you!
2007-03-28 14:49:00 · answer #7 · answered by goodbye 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats a nice poem. even if you wrote it yourself? but thats not gonna help you find true love. you sound a lil desperate. next time don't try too hard.
Goodluck
2007-03-28 14:51:57 · answer #8 · answered by brenda_lilb 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem.. Poor solicitation...
2007-03-28 14:48:48 · answer #9 · answered by Its me!!! :) 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Loved the poem! I really hope you find her soon, Good Luck!!!
2007-03-28 14:51:07 · answer #10 · answered by Ms. Jo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋