I had to include an Allusion, the allusion; mine is to "Nature" -Emerson
Please tell me if it makes sense, and if the Allusion is placed well and easily pinpointed, also if it is any good.
Here it goes:
Men have said I am unworthy
But they do not understand
Others Praise me for my worth
But they too do not understand
Judgments aside:..
My dignity does not reside
In those transparent eyes
For I am as beautiful as my own nature.
2007-03-28 07:32:36 · 3 answers · asked by thewiseman2008 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
Please if you have not read "Nature" by Emerson, don't try to comment on my Allusion, as you only make yourself look stupid.
2007-03-28 08:34:56 · update #1
i love ur chioce of words.(diction) great peom , it can be arranged a little differently. (great job)
2007-03-28 07:40:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i wont make look stupid because i know what the term allusion is.
by the way your poem is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-03-28 13:29:34 · answer #2 · answered by rosie a 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great Poem!
2007-03-28 08:59:09 · answer #3 · answered by Smleh 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋