if you believe in me
like I believe in you
you wouldn't be telling me things
that weren't exactly true
now everythin' changes
ain't nothin' the same
I'm gettin' the strangest feelin' baby
I can't remember my name
cause the life I been living
and the love I been giving
would be sure to set you spinning
but youre never touching ground
and I'm round and round
2007-03-28 04:22:25 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Baby its round about an 8
2007-03-29 02:10:38 · answer #1 · answered by ﺸÐïåMóñdÐôññåﺸ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! Totally awesome, have you ever considered entering some of your work into a poem contest like reader's digest.Just a thought.
2007-03-28 11:33:36 · answer #2 · answered by purple_roses48 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi sister m,
the poem is nice. keep it writing.
pl read few lines of mine-
the sky is not blue
As it was before
the forest is not green
As it was before!
sea has been polluted
the water has dried
rivers are not flowing
as they were before!
the blood is not red
as it was before
the heart is not clear
as it was before!
the relation is not there
as it was before,
nobody is to love there,
as it was before!
neverthless enjoy the life as it may come!
2007-03-28 11:43:24 · answer #3 · answered by amarnath 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its great. 8/10
2007-03-28 11:26:32 · answer #4 · answered by bunbananabun 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its alright...it sounded more like a rap to me, it didn't have the elegance of an actual poem... but its a good rap. (?!)
2007-03-28 11:31:18 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
great and nice9/10
2007-03-28 11:30:01 · answer #6 · answered by parmis_232003 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool
2007-03-28 11:27:13 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it!
2007-03-28 11:30:22 · answer #8 · answered by Snickerlicious 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how cute =]
2007-03-28 11:33:44 · answer #9 · answered by xx_mcr16_xx 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋