Chained
Lying on the corners of isolation,
wondering how much more?
This endless silence corrupts me,
is this what life had in store?
Dragged and beaten with oppression,
what do you want of me?
When my freedom's stripped away,
and you stole my dignity.
Oh, these chains will not hold,
soon I will break free of this,
I'd taste sweet liberty once more,
and live the rest in timeless bliss.
Restrain me all you want,
for there's nothing you can do.
When these chains lose hold of me,
and instead be bound on you.
2007-03-28 03:38:07 · 8 answers · asked by <Xariel the Stray> 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
LOVE the last stanza. And oh, to be lost in timeless bliss.
What a delicious thought.....
2007-03-28 11:35:37 · answer #1 · answered by Jasmine Lily 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
im sorry i just cant get over how good of a writer you are!!! iam the same way i have like 4 big folders full of poems that i have written!!! I am like that when ever i get depressed about something I write!! Like since i found out my boyfriend cheated on me i have written like 20 poems about that!!! Do u do that!! U should consider publishing!!! I would definalty buy it!!!!
2007-03-28 03:44:50 · answer #2 · answered by JessieRae07 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Depressing. Sorry!
2007-03-28 03:40:31 · answer #3 · answered by ollie91rocks 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like someone contemplating suicide. Whoever wrote this..........
Life is never quite that bad, get help, people care
2007-03-28 03:41:47 · answer #4 · answered by Sam h 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty kool, you should check out some of my songs and poems i've written on my myspace.
www.myspace.com/lover_chic_16
2007-03-28 03:45:49 · answer #5 · answered by *devil eyes* 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ooooooooh that one gave me chills!
2007-03-28 05:06:42 · answer #6 · answered by sistermarybella 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
why can't you people ask these questions in "polls and survey's"?
2007-03-28 03:41:13 · answer #7 · answered by NONAME 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well done..
strong words.
2007-03-28 03:54:58 · answer #8 · answered by G?ld?n ang?l 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋