Alone
melancholy in the silence,
drowning in my pain.
the night you turned away,
and left me under the rain.
regret within the twilight,
what is it that I lack?
my dreams were shattered that day,
when my fears became a fact.
Emptiness by the abyss,
all hope crashing down,
this feeling comes and hits,
when you're not around.
solitude in the symphony,
dancing to the tune on my own,
these feelings creep to me,
whenever i'm alone.
2007-03-28 03:04:53 · 6 answers · asked by <Xariel the Stray> 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
What can I say...swoon! This is my favorite so far but, they are all really good.
2007-03-28 05:09:18 · answer #1 · answered by sistermarybella 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LYKEOMG!!!!!!CREEPY GOTH KID!!!!!!!
lol, just kidding (I'm typically known as the creepy goth kid)
I actually thought it was very good
Nice flow, really good word choice
It would make a really good song
But it also makes an awesome poem
2007-03-28 10:09:19 · answer #2 · answered by Zasm 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats amazing and really touching, it seems like its really getting out how your feeling and how I was feeling about a week ago. Your writting is really good. Keep it up.
2007-03-28 10:16:49 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOL @ "creepy goth kid." As if having and expressing emotions makes you 'goth.'
LOVELY poem, just as your first. I can feel it. Definitely.
2007-03-28 18:34:07 · answer #4 · answered by Jasmine Lily 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
my gosh i love your writing do me a favor and put some more on here so i can read them please u are such an amazing writter!! And if u really feel this way Im sorry!!! Please put somemore up PLZ PLZ PLZ
2007-03-28 10:10:49 · answer #5 · answered by JessieRae07 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I truely like this poem.Melts my heart.
2007-03-28 10:25:15 · answer #6 · answered by Sheeth 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋