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Question

Endometritis which restrict the sustainable development of livestock breeding is a common disease of cows. Pathogenic bacterium of the uterus secretion of diseased dairy cattle were isolated and identified. The drug sensitivity of bacteria were detemined for western medicine and traditional Chinese medicine. The results showed that five kinds of bacterium take a large ratio. the rate of S. streptococcus、E coli、B.cereus、Streptococcus uberis and Staphylococcus aureus were 14.48%、13.57%、11.76%、11.31% and 7.69%；ciprofloxacin、Enrofloxacin and levofloxacin were extremely sentitive to these five pathogenic microorganisms especial ciprofloxacin. The result of two fold dilution indicated that the antibacterial activity of Fructus chebulae, Radix Salviae Miltiorrhia、Rhizoma Polygoni Cuspidati、Radix Scutellariae、Herba Ephedrae、Flos Lonicerae、Fructus Forsythiae、Herba Taraxacion 5 pathogenic microorganisms much better, and their MIC reached 31 g/L or 63 g/L；The result of stiletto indicated that the antibacterial activity of Fructus Chebulae、Radix Salviae Miltiorrhiae、Radix Scutellariae、Herba Taraxaci、Herba Ephedrae、Flos Lonicerae、Herba Taraxaci were moderate sensitive or extremely sensitive to 5 pathogenic microorganisms.The best Chinese medicinal herb compound was determined on the basises of results.

Answer 1

The english grammer is pretty poor. I'll try my best as some of it is confusing.

Endometritis is a common disease of cows that restricts the sustainable development of lifestock breeding. Pathogenic bacteria from the uterus of infected cattle were isolated and identified; durg sensitivity tests were run for antibiotics and traditional chinese medicine.

This is were it gets hard to understand you.

something about the bacteria you isolated.....The bacteria were sensitive to enrofloxac, levofloxacin and ciprofloxacin. A 2 fold dilution series was set up for the chinese medicines, and it was found that the bacteria were more sensitive to medicines x, x, and x, than the antibiotics. The chinese medicines had a MIC of 31gL to 63g/L. Using these results, the best chinese medicine was determined to be x.