Does this make sense as for narrative?

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Does this make sense as for narrative?

"Junio persistently stands on the top rank in field of ‘Well-being’ Electronic Home Appliances.

Universally widespread Mega-trend - ‘Well-being.'

The company that values our environment and the future; Junio is distinctive and different."

Where is the akward part? Thisis a narrative. Help.

If you can help me out any further, please let me know. Email : lala11365@yahoo.com)

2007-03-25 23:49:18 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help

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Ummm...narratives are stories not essays.

2007-03-25 23:52:54 · answer #1 · answered by blakesleefam 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Little Darling, I have sent you an email explaining how I would fix this. Good Luck...

2007-03-26 00:10:27 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋