I never believed I'd have these feelings again, but I couldn't control them. I am so happy for it.
Ok the second sentence should it read I am so happy for them or is there another way to say this sentence Any writers or people or if you are good with grammar please reply this is for a love letter
2007-03-25 22:34:37 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
The line is grammatically correct, yet doesn't sit too well with the ears. The thought is supposed to have an impact though, so keep it separate than the first sentence. I would write:
"I never believed I could have these feelings again, but can't seem to control them. I am so happy."
You don't need the for "it" because it is redundant and doesn't flow that well. You could follow that sentence up with "You have brought so much joy into my life and feelings I never thought possible. Thank you."
GL with your love letter.
2007-03-25 22:45:53 · answer #1 · answered by TrixyLoo 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I never believed I'd have these feelings again, but I couldn't control them, for which I am so very happy.
2007-03-25 23:09:49 · answer #2 · answered by dumenuff 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Consider this:
"I never believed I'd have these feelings again, but I couldn't control them and am so happy I had them."
2007-03-25 22:40:23 · answer #3 · answered by rondoggnuts 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am so happy, I just can't control nor believe I could have these feelings again.
2007-03-25 22:38:32 · answer #4 · answered by Summer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont really know what you are trying to say- i take it that this is a love letter- try this:
I never believed I'd have these uncontrollable feelings of desire again. I'm glad they returned.
2007-03-25 22:42:55 · answer #5 · answered by zeichnicht 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It felt so wonderful to have them. This would sound better because it is referring to the plural feelings and it is also referring back to the occasion and how wonderful it felt to have the feeling again.
2007-03-25 23:02:42 · answer #6 · answered by don n 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am so very happy I could die, I can't thank you enough! Love always.
2007-03-25 22:39:42 · answer #7 · answered by mark [mjimih] 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Actually the line is correct as stated. :)
2007-03-25 22:40:24 · answer #8 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
2nd
2007-03-25 22:36:46 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol sounds the same either way..
2007-03-25 22:37:35 · answer #10 · answered by Morgan 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋