Writing HW help...needed?

Question

"The most important and essential keys to regenerate the nature in our big and engaged society are pure water, and fresh air.


Junio had made profits of $1 million within ten years following company’s establishment, and accomplished to promote swift growth over time with the expansion of well-being market which refers to trend of organic and wellness of health."



Are these making sense? I;m having trouble doing my writing hw...someone help.

Answer 1

"The most important and essential keys to regenerate nature, in our big and engaged society, are pure water, and fresh air."

Try: Two important keys to regenerate nature in our big engaged society are pure water and fresh air.
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Junio had made profits of $1 million within ten years following company’s establishment, and accomplished to promote swift growth over time with the expansion of well-being market which refers to trend of organic and wellness of health."

Try: Junio had made profits of $1 million within ten years following the company’s establishment. They were able to promote swift growth over time with the expansion into the organic, health and wellness trend."

-it is kind of difficult because I can see the rest of the paper or your source of information.

-you also want to try to use the least amount of words to convey your message. Be clear and concise.

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Answer 3

pretty good but put an "A" between 'of' and 'well-being'