PLEASE answer!!!!!!! :(?

Question

.*.well you see, I had to wright a poem for my gift class, do you
think this is good?

with love that's forever strong,
I shine like stars in the deepest darkest nights.
I burn like the sun that is long to burn out.
I race like a shooting star across the midnight sky.
I wander like a child lost in the outer lengths of space.
To forever hold peace,
In the imagination of a place never seen!
Forever will I wander through space.

Answer 1

I think I'm in love

Answer 2

It's a nice poem because you are trying to say something from your heart, but it smacks of a juvenile amateur approach that lacks the attempt to draw it's audience into a profound depth. Still, it should be adequate if you are just trying to get through a class. You could write a more meaningful poem if you took the time to ponder on any event in your life that left you emotionally stunned, but devoid of judgement, anger, and fear, and that also has a message of forgiveness and love.

Answer 3

with love with love,
like cars and horses,
not normal cars,
the preprogramed ones
of preprogramed courses,
dancing ballets,
just like horses,
but faster,
much faster,

life a house of cards,
as fast as the cards fall,
the folk sprawl,
with love with love

Answer 4

Sounds good to me.

Answer 5

It's very thoughtful. The important thing is, do you like it?

Answer 6

yes it is indeed nice but you should have made it rhyming to sound good

Answer 7

Nice for a star(t)!

Answer 8

no because it doesnt have any meaning... also it contradicts itself.. i was in gifted 2 tho so ur teacher will proboly say its good because its so confusing... lol :)

Answer 9

yes it all rhymes