Three Jedi padawans graduated from the academy of 6 years of training. 2 chose to wield a Fierce Green lightsaber, the other chose to wield a Baby Blue Color Lightsaber but he was blind and really did not even know he had a saber to begin with. The 2 Greens left the blue alone, or so the blue thought...but they were always with him ready to Defend against the evil that were out to get him in the 7th year. The Sith at the acolyte academy was known as Stephon Settedupumpkinhead who thought he was Gwito but was really too kosher for his own good. This Sith tried his hardest to terrorize and and spiritually obliterate Baby Blue, he was successful to some degree, Baby Blue became deaf, dumb, and blind for a period of 14 years and has many scars which he will carry forever to remind him of this Sith and their fake family who waves a flag that bears the name of a Blue Star, WE KNOW WHO YOU ARE ready Setteducawdi GO!
2007-03-25 15:03:38 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Mythology & Folklore
I WILL NOT DIE FOR YOUR FLAG STEVEN SETTEDUCADI DID YOU DIE FOR MINE?
2007-03-25 15:05:17 · update #1
IT IS IN YOUR BEST INTEREST TO NOT STEP UP AGAIN DOES THE NAME MARY RING A BELL? OR HOW ABOUT THIS?...THE LION OF THE TRIBE OF JUDAH. "Satan The Lord Rebuketh You." -Micheal the Archangel
2007-03-25 15:12:10 · update #2
BRAD DO YOU WANT MY PHONE NUMBER SO WE CAN SET UP A DEATHMATCH BOXING FIGHT?
2007-03-25 16:06:42 · update #3
i think it definately has the potential to become a good jedi tale, given the right...help. Your additional comments were interesting also. Is this Christian-based? 'Cause that would be really cool. Hey, i'd pay to see this movie :)
2007-03-25 15:20:16 · answer #1 · answered by Lara W 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A blind Jedi accompanied by 2 others would make an interesting team, so the storyline has promise. Work on your characterizations a bit; character drives the story.
Perhaps the blind Jedi, like other blind people, can use his heightened Jedi senses (since he is deprived of his sight) or could maybe "see" by the Force.
Most Jedi padawan stories don't take 14 years. Resolve the issue within about 3 months, otherwise it is too long!
2007-03-25 22:42:34 · answer #2 · answered by MamaBear 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Interesting. Needs development, but it has promise. I'd say try to be a little less personal in your approach to telling the story, as much as Stephon might be a 'pumpkinhead' you should find a better way to put it, it doesn't quite sound right.
Perhaps Darth Setteduc, has a Sith ring to it, no?
But most importantly, let go of your anger, it is clear you carry a great deal aimed at this Stephon character.
2007-03-25 22:20:32 · answer #3 · answered by Taliesin Pen Beirdd 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds too "Harry Potter"-ish
2007-03-25 22:32:17 · answer #4 · answered by Experto Credo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No , you suck
2007-03-25 22:29:53 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋