I felt that you were gradually feeling closer to me over time because of the sharing of our past relationships and disappointments with each other.
if there is a better word for relationships and disappointments let me know. I am trying to say this I felt that we were getting closer becuase of the fact that we shared our past relationships and disappointments with each other. That is how my boyfriend and i bonded and i wanted to let him know that because we opened up with each other about our fears disappointments it made us be close. Please rewrite that sentence for me with better wording if needed and grammar. Anyone with grammar or writing skills please advise thanks
should I take out the word gradually or does it flow ok. How should I rewrite this, are there any commas needed?
relationships and disappointments dont balance what other words can Iuse with disappointments or with relationships?
2007-03-25 11:44:41 · 3 answers · asked by bobravers 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I felt that it was becuase we were able to open up with one another-- by sharing our past disspointments; our secrets, and our fears-- that overtime we grew to become so close.
2007-03-25 11:49:23 · answer #1 · answered by ♥Pictsy♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought that you were gradually feeling closer to me over time because of the sharing of our passed relationships and disappointments with one another.
2007-03-25 13:02:20 · answer #2 · answered by alex 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
compainionship and downfalls
Good Luck with your LOVE
2007-03-25 11:49:42 · answer #3 · answered by Lexy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋