I felt that you were gradually feeling closer to me over time because of the sharing of our past relationships and disappointments with each other.
2007-03-25 11:09:43 · 11 answers · asked by bobravers 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
if there is a better word for relationships and siapointments let me know. I am trying to say this I felt that we were getting closer becuase of the fact that we shard our past realtionships and disappointments with each other. That is how my boyfriend and i bonded and i wanted to let hm know that because we opened up with each other about our fears disappointments it made us be close. Please rewrite that sentence for me with better wording if needed and grammar. Anyone with grammar or writing skills please advise thanks
2007-03-25 11:12:08 · update #1
should I take out the word gradually or does it flow ok. How should I rewrite this, are there any commas needed?
2007-03-25 11:14:51 · update #2
relationships and disappointments dont balance what other words can i use with disappointments or with relationships?
2007-03-25 11:16:08 · update #3
Having shared past relationships and disappointments, I felt that you were feeling closer to me.
2007-03-25 11:13:26 · answer #1 · answered by jake78745 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I feel that you are gradually becoming closer to me over time because of the experiences of our past relationships and as a result we have overcome the disappointments we experienced with each other and because of this we have some how grown stronger together..
2007-03-25 11:16:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Because we have shared about our past relationships and disappointments with each other, over time, I have felt that we have gradually grown closer.
2007-03-25 13:17:14 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Version One: "I felt that you were, gradually, feeling closer to me over time; because of the sharing of our past relationships and disappiontments with each other."
Version Two: "I felt that you were gradually feeling closer to me over time, because of the sharing of our past relationships and disappointments with each other."
2007-03-25 11:15:43 · answer #4 · answered by hatchland 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just find two words that balance. Relationships and disappointments don't.
2007-03-25 11:14:11 · answer #5 · answered by bullwinkle 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you feel closer to me do to our sharing of past relationships and unfortunate disappointments...
2007-03-25 11:18:30 · answer #6 · answered by blueJean 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I felt you were feeling closer to me because we have shared our experiences and feelings with one another.
2007-03-25 11:18:54 · answer #7 · answered by beez 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
RELATIONSHIP-relations, dealings, associations, affairs, contact, interaction
DISAPPOINTMENTS-dissatisfaction, displeasure, distress, discontent, disenchantment, disillusionment, frustration, regret
YOU CAN TRY USING SOME OF THOSE WORDS YOU PICK...
2007-03-25 11:18:13 · answer #8 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Get rid of the third word.
2007-03-25 11:12:43 · answer #9 · answered by Beau D. Satva 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It appears to be fine to me.
2007-03-25 11:13:17 · answer #10 · answered by Shawntae S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋