summeray: guy meets a girl at jr. high party . he looks about 16 or 17 and she's 14 . he grabs her and takes her home from the party to some old decreped building . girl finds out the guy is a vampire and he killed her parents so she belongs to him now. when they get in the building there are 4 other vampires. she trys to escape and dosn't make it. they are about to make her a vampire when her boyfriend comes busting in the door and rescues her and then she finds out that he's a werewolf.
do you think that you would read that??
2007-03-25 10:20:50 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
i didn't put in that many details and so yeah it sounds like a ten year old wrote it but it's just to see if you would read something fromthat kind of topic.
2007-03-25 10:31:25 · update #1
That sure is a twist and it sounds good. I'd be willing to read it.
suggestion?
What if her parents are somehow also affiliated with the darkworld of vampires and etc. SInce they were interfearing with the vampires sceme, they killed the parents and after finding out that she has no clue about it they try to bring her to their side.
just a suggestion
Good luck with writing!
God bless you
K.K.
2007-03-25 11:27:06 · answer #1 · answered by Kurious_Kat 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like a really creative story. Only part i probably would change about it is her boyfriend being a werewolf. I would like the story better if the boyfriend was also a vampire but loved her so much, that he couldnt let them turn her into one and they go on the run. The whole vampire/werewolf together thing reminds me too much of "Underworld"
2007-03-25 17:48:25 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
You need to do a LOT of work on characterization and plot. Right now it sounds pretty typical of low end vampire stories. Start with a really good outline. Develop your plot and some subplots. Work on your character studies and analysis. If he killed her parents, wouldnt they now be vampires too? Also, before you think about starting to write a book, you need to work on your spelling, punctuation and grammar. You have a long way to go. Pax - C.
2007-03-25 17:33:48 · answer #3 · answered by Persiphone_Hellecat 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yes. I like horror books where the people find out tat they are dating monsters.
If you like it, watch Mom's Got A Date With A Vampire. It's made or kids, but in my opinion, it's very good.
2007-03-25 17:26:10 · answer #4 · answered by Madeline C 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, if you're looking for my honest opinion, it's kind of...odd. it probably wouldn't be a book I'd pick up, look at the cover, and decide to read. If you thought this up, you have a great imagination, but I'd work a little harder. Keep it up!
2007-03-25 17:25:35 · answer #5 · answered by emilie hope 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No... that sounds like something a ten year old would think up after watching too much Smallville. I wouldn't read it.
2007-03-25 17:25:25 · answer #6 · answered by Kiki B 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i was all into it and then u said vampire.... and it just ruined everything...... mabe like they go to his house and stuff happens ,but she has a bf.... but they decide to run away to be together forever(since everyone doesnt want them to ) and then like 10 yrs pass and the old bf starts to look for her and like yeah... i would read it if it was about that....good luck!
2007-03-25 17:31:14 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That will be a... AWESOME book to be readen, I love horror books there cool and lots of action and scary stuff
2007-03-25 18:06:48 · answer #8 · answered by SilverStream 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Eh....it sounds like one of those books I would pick up and skim through, but not buy to read..
2007-03-25 18:06:00 · answer #9 · answered by Dee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, I would not. Sorry. Did you write that? It needs a lot of work.
2007-03-25 17:24:13 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋