were a new young band working on some new music. tell us what you think.?

Question

http://www.virb.com/roadofintentions

please be aware that im young and you know this isnt my life i just felt like writing songs. *also most songs are life so the quality might not be great. *

Answer 1

Overall, the band doesn't have any dimension, it's very one dimensional right now. The singing, lyrics, guitar, drum parts are not really developed and not "full" sounding, if you catch my drift. It's not too terrible, I have heard worst.

Answer 2

To be completely honest, I think that your band needs a bit of work. The vocals are a little...unfabulous. Try auditioning other singers in your area, it'll help your sound a lot. The guitar isn't bad at all, but you can tell that you're not really very experienced. I can hardly hear the drums, too, so try working on that. The lyrics need just a little more dimension, because if you're going to keep the music relatively simple then the lyrics had better be mind-blowing. Otherwise, I think your sound is pretty cool. The first song sounds a bit like the Shins, which I liked a lot.