An unfortunate journey
Through a bleak sea of loneliness
I carve through the waves of grief
In a black vastness of self doubt
I have never felt so alone
So pitiful and wretched and low
I'm tried by a terrible wind
The misery and the pain blow
The clouds of grey come overhead
A storm will hunt me down
And rip the guts out of my body
That I would surely drown
Thrashing out at torment and pain
The maddened sea engulfs me
I let myself be swallowed up
The magnificent weight upon me
Deeper I go, deeper down
Didn't think it could get any blacker
The cold bites, the pressure builds
I think I no longer matter
When lovers die and friendships fade
When kin all lie forgotten
The gates of agony spew forth
Your memories, sinking and rotten
So deep now I feel so numb
I'm ravaged by utter loss
The guilt, the grief, the astounding pain
My body, they all will wash
I hope I never return to life
Oh, Christ just let me go
2007-03-25 05:04:56 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
Let death devour my simple soul
Lest my misery grow
2007-03-25 05:05:09 · update #1
I think its really deep and depressing so im going to give it a 8.5 10 being the most drepressing. I hope this is not how you really feel. The thing that got me the most about it was
~When lovers die and friendships fade
~When kin all lie forgotten
~The gates of agony spew forth
~Your memories, sinking and rotten
Memories are the thing that last forever. The loved ones that you've lost would want you to always have those memories with them. Wouldn't you want your loved ones to always remember the good times they've had with you after your gone?
2007-03-25 05:18:44 · answer #1 · answered by Meiko420 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
3
2007-03-25 15:10:42 · answer #2 · answered by janne5011 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-03-25 12:08:57 · answer #3 · answered by tripppah 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
6
2007-03-25 12:13:34 · answer #4 · answered by a_blossom_91 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'd have to give it an 8 out of 10. Being the pathetic depressed person I am, I totally loved this poem. It really spoke to me on various levels... it pretty much describes how I feel. ^^'
2007-03-25 12:27:29 · answer #5 · answered by Koko 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9? Clearly displaying a "life just constantly brings me down and there is no escape" message. The Christ part could signify death.
2007-03-25 12:13:45 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Depending on how you're rating your scale, I'm going with either -7 or 24.
2007-03-25 12:12:26 · answer #7 · answered by TheOnlyBeldin 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Light weight stuff. I give it a 2 MAX.
2007-03-25 12:12:16 · answer #8 · answered by infidel-louie 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I give it a big deep10 on the B.S. list get over it my suicidal friend.
2007-03-25 12:17:18 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
-67
2007-03-25 12:13:04 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋