Does anyone like this poem that i wrote?

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Does anyone like this poem that i wrote?

*****please dont copy+paste.******* i wrote this poem:

Spread your wings and fly,
Fly into the deep blue sky,
Fly with a smile on your face
and a new journey in your eyes.

Take this chance,
for it is one of the few,
to spread the beautiful wings,
that God gave you.

2007-03-25 03:06:55 · 3 answers · asked by casey 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors

3 answers

Luv it!!! You should be a poet!!! Such talent!!! I like poems!!!

2007-03-25 03:15:37 · answer #1 · answered by beloni 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Yes I like it but if it was longer and rhymed more I would love it

2007-03-25 10:11:47 · answer #2 · answered by R H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

beautiful~try publishing it!

2007-03-25 10:25:09 · answer #3 · answered by lawyergurl92 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋