Tell me if this is a good poem??
It was a white snowy day,
The schools were closed,
The children were out to play,
But Then Came The big Evil snowplow.
The driver was an angry, scary guy,
He had big bushy brows, with scary little eyes,
The children were scared, some of them even cried,
As they saw the big evil snowplow.
He looked like he was getting ready to start plowing,
The children were throwing snowballs at him,
It didn't work but at least they were trying,
But then stopped the big evil snowplow.
The children were scared, as the driver stepped outside,
He went to the back and reached for something,
Then he came with a shovel, right by his side,
Now getting further from the big evil snowplow.
He approached the kids, not looking like that old angry man,
He stuck that shovel in the snow,
"Let's make a happy white snowman",
Said the nice man from the big evil snowplow.
Don't judge people from appearances as you may know,
People can be very nice even if they look really low,
Always look at their heart not what their faces show,
A great example is the man from the Big Evil Snowplow.
2007-03-24 04:55:20 · 22 answers · asked by aj r 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Phew - I've seen a lot of rubbish on this site - but yours is not one of them.
It's actually quite good.
Well done.
2007-03-24 04:59:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry, but I'm gonna be honest with you. I don't like it. I mean, it's OK, but mostly you need to brush up. Big Evil Snowplow is kinda a weird name, and I just feel that you could do better for the lesson that you're trying to teach. Sorry if this makes you feel bad of something, but I'm just saying the truth, or how I feel, at least.
2007-03-24 05:07:08 · answer #2 · answered by ツ 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
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2016-12-08 10:11:03 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, it sounds a little weird, but it's a good way to teach children not to judge people by appereances!
2007-03-30 07:07:14 · answer #4 · answered by Creepy Kourtney 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked it, reminded me of the old man in home alone that the kid was afraid of him. And the old guy turned out to be good people.
2007-03-29 23:44:51 · answer #5 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you have a positive attitude on the world . God bless you. We need more people who see past the superficial and see real people. Pretty good writer too
2007-03-24 05:07:50 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it. I guess it really shows your optimism about people in the world, including strangers.
I'm the same way.
Very nice!
2007-03-24 05:12:33 · answer #7 · answered by Ms* Shae* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was a preety good poem, i thought! And you are right, you can't judge people by there appearences.
2007-03-31 08:59:54 · answer #8 · answered by [~LexieLuLu~] 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your describing that movie Snow Day...
BE ORIGINAL
2007-04-01 04:54:48 · answer #9 · answered by Mrs.Beckford 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
*Clapping* That was brilliant! I loved it because it tought a lesson and its true, never judge by appearance.
2007-04-01 04:13:10 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋