Are there any spelling, grammar or stylistic mistakes in my text?

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Could you take a quick look at the text below?
We are a small agency based in Warrington, UK specialising in high quality digital graffiti design. We are a team of dedicated graphic designers with more than twelve years of experience in graffiti design, urban art and graphics. Our style is original, fresh and definitely eye-catching. What makes us unique is the quality of the projects we create - all our work is drawn by hand and converted into vector graphics which lets us maintain a very high level of details and gives unlimited scaling possibilities (a 1-inch logo can be easily converted into a 100-inch banner in seconds with no loss in quality).

We treat our business and our clients seriously, we take good care of communication and listen carefully to our clients' needs, views and opinions. We are very flexible and open-minded and you can always count on our conceptual help and direction.

We specialise in: - Logos (design or enhancement), - Record and CD covers, - Flyers, - Posters, - Skateboard / snowboard graphics, - Clothing graphics, - Illustrations, - Advertisements, - Fonts, - Web graphics

And we also design:, - Banners (outdoor and web), - Company identity, - Brochures, - Icons, - Product packaging, - 3D objects, - Fine art (paintings and drawings)

The final file can be in all standard formats (Corel, Illustrator, Photoshop, PDF, JPEG etc) for both web and print. All the projects are created as vector objects so they are very detailed and in high quality. The prices and turn-around time are discussed for every individual project and depend on complexity of the project. Please contact us to get a price. We design from scratch following your directons or can base our work on an example - if you have something in mind please draw it or send us a picture. For examples of graffiti styles please see the STYLES section.

There are many types and styles of graffiti: Wildstyle, 3D, Bubbles, Blockbuster, Oldschool, Nuskool, Throw-up, Tag. If you want your project to be in particular style please send us an example. The best place to find one is www.graffiti.org

Below is an example of the creation process for a graffiti logo: 1.First step is to create a hand drawn sketch, 2.Next the sketch is converted into vector graphics, 3.With outlines ready light and 3D shape is added, 4. The next step is to create various color versions.

Answer 1

Two comments:

1. In the section about what you specialize in (sorry, US spelling), use either the comma or the dash - not both.

2. Final paragraph: Might want to use 'following' instead of 'below'. Disregard if 'below' is UK usage. In the third item, '...light and 3D shape ARE added.'

The listing of the four items lacks parallelism. In a listing such as this, it is better for all the entries to have the same format and structure - some key to let the reader know when he encounters a separate item of the list. In this case you might use the verbs of each step - Create/Convert/Add/Create - as the first word of each. You already have them numbered, so repeating 'First step...' after 1. is redundant, as is using 'Next ..." for 2 - people already know 2 is next after 1.

Really a good description of what you do and how you do it. Good Luck!

Answer 2

Cheap advertisment! Well done!!