I need help with the flow etc...Are you up to the challenge?
You have my heart in your hands
Grasp it gently, sincerely, and it shall remain
Grasp it too lightly, and it may fall through you fingertips
Take me seriously, take me away with you
Grip it tautly, but not …
Everytime you talk, you touch my heart
Everytime you smile, my breath escapes me
You have my heart, luckily just a piece
For fate has stricken, it has smitten me down
My heart that
You hold my heart in your hands
Hold it lightly, for we tread on hallow ground
Too loose and itll fall from your grasp
Too tightly and
2007-03-23 23:27:59 · 3 answers · asked by roncho 4 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Oh, by the way... im asking for assistance;Its in pieces, i need help putting it together. The haphazard poem that is.
2007-03-23 23:42:08 · update #1
If Someone helps with this poem, is it still YOURS ? A poem is an expression, extention of what you feel or felt. For it to be YOURS, you must do the grunt work, the writing ie:The Feeling
2007-03-23 23:36:28 · answer #1 · answered by uwantme2dowhat_crackkillsmoron 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i might compress and die from the stress at hand
2007-03-23 23:32:16 · answer #2 · answered by game boy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
boldly
2007-03-23 23:39:51 · answer #3 · answered by Archangel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋