What do you think of "the special one" poem?
Ok this poem I actually was thinking. It about how hard it is to find the special one and the feelings behind it all. This probably took me at least 10 minutes to think about for awhile. Click my pic. to see my other poems in questions. I am told..
"The special one"
Who is that special one?
The one that gives me trust,
true love, not lust?
Must I wait for him sitting in the park,
Waiting until dark,
waiting for our hearts to spark?
Who is that special one?
The one that holds me in his hands,
the one who cuddles me up,
Running his fingers through my hair strand by strands.
Why is hard to find the special one?
The world is so huge,
but there is no safety,
we both must take refuge.
Confusion in my brain,
Kissing in the rain,
what a perfect dream,
We work a perfect team.
We take what's left,
undone what must be done,
I finally take the beautiful turn,
I have found the special one.
-katekitty, 13
2007-03-23 15:33:13 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I am told I am talented. Please read through my other questions that contains a poem and answer there as well. Thankyou for reading. =)
2007-03-23 15:34:15 · update #1
It's pretty good... I write poetry too... At first I was gunna say it was ok but i hadn't realized you are 13... thats much better than anything I wrote at 13... overall i applaude you on this commendable work! Great job. =D
2007-03-23 15:37:03 · answer #1 · answered by Andreios 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You caught me at a foul time, b. All outgoing, none incoming. Be enjoyed given which you're rather fortunate. Love all, and you'd be disillusioned. enable love love people who desire love? if so, the place is mine? i like it while love loves. i'm sorely disillusioned. Oh, nicely, it replaced into an elementary answer. Ofttimes, honesty is the medicine maximum distasteful. The reflections in the mirror on no account do flatter, yet share certainty. Happiness is over-rated, i've got heard, yet on no account substantiated in journey. Sorry, having a foul week. thank you for the cleansing soap field.
2016-10-19 11:42:24 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good job , keep it up & b4 u know it ull be able 2 get enough 2gether 4 ur own book 2 b publushed
2007-03-23 18:08:43 · answer #3 · answered by dude 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that was powerful. I wish i can right poetry like that. Keep writing and you will one day be a successful poet.
2007-03-23 15:55:00 · answer #4 · answered by Shelby N 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You ARE talented. Maybe you should publish. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you so much for sharing.
2007-03-23 15:44:11 · answer #5 · answered by Mailman 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is good. Keep up the good work?
2007-03-23 15:43:40 · answer #6 · answered by Niddy G 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋