I made this in early march just sitting in my computer and just thinking about it for 30 seconds. I am quite talented as most people say. I am only 13. Though, I know I do lack some poetry things here & there but.. tell me what you think!
Crushes are hard,
Hard to figure out,
You always want to know,
what they are all about.
You sit and think for a moment,
Is this the right guy?
You get confused,
as you see him walk by.
Your heart pounds so fast,
You try to look attractive,
You try to look cool,
You feel very active.
You talk about them with your best friend,
This dreadful confusion, you want it all to end.
You try not to like him,
You just pretend.
Crushes are crushes,
You always think their interest lack,
But you never know,
Until they like you back.
Crushes are confusing,
You never know what to say,
until you experience them,
they come a long way.
-katekitty, 13
2007-03-23 13:15:18 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
It's rubbish.
2007-03-23 13:17:32 · answer #1 · answered by Bestie 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's pretty good i give it 4 out of 5
2007-03-23 13:18:42 · answer #2 · answered by 1.2..3...Boo 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow, uve got talent, jus try 2 write bout somethin with more drama, put all of ur heart into it, poetry is all about the drama
2007-03-23 13:19:47 · answer #3 · answered by elisa marie. 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that was really good. and you are very talented for a 13 year old
2007-03-23 13:21:25 · answer #4 · answered by wonder 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, you're no Robert Frost, but then again you're only 13.
It's a good start, though, keep it up!!
2007-03-23 13:19:29 · answer #5 · answered by ninamcguinness 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Bravo!! very nice, it seems to me that u have a crush there,and it is actually what happens when u are in "love" around your age.
2007-03-23 13:20:18 · answer #6 · answered by lizeth g 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is a really good poem but one thing is the part that says "You always think their interest lack", u should shorten it to 'You think their interest is lack'. Besides that...its great!!!!
2007-03-23 13:20:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's very nice and tells the truth! And no one says rubbish
2007-03-23 13:19:18 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's a great poem!
I think you're really talented and keep it up!
2007-03-23 13:18:07 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice writing there, Katy.
2007-03-23 13:18:17 · answer #10 · answered by Disco Mudda 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it'd work on me, thats gotta mean something right?
(and no im not some wierd adult im a 13 year old guy.)
2007-03-23 13:18:49 · answer #11 · answered by Your Add Here! 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋