so tell me now
how do i live without you
i want to know
how do i breathe without you
if you ever go
how would i ever, ever survive
how would i
oh how would i live?
what do you think?
any good?
2007-03-23 12:19:16 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Its good but its the lyrics to a song.
2007-03-23 12:32:21 · answer #1 · answered by shortstuff 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
not to be rude but it stinks.
for a poem to be any good it takes extreme hard work, u need to spend at least an hour per line.
hope it turns out well
2007-03-23 19:32:02 · answer #2 · answered by hailymae 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What drivel. It sounds like all the drek that passes for rock music these days.
2007-03-23 19:22:40 · answer #3 · answered by outlaw_tattoo_biker 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
uh....sorry but that really sucks.
Its terribly needy...bordering stalker...
frankly its downright suffocating.
(btw...people don't need other people to breath life into them...learn to stand on your own 2 feet, and leave the poems to Hallmark!)
2007-03-24 00:46:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it make you sound like a stalker
2007-03-23 19:22:30 · answer #5 · answered by Monell K 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought it was pretty good. But that's just me.
2007-03-23 19:23:44 · answer #6 · answered by Mo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its nice. You can Change 'go' to 'leave me'. It does not have to rhyme.
2007-03-23 19:28:22 · answer #7 · answered by Shivanie R 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good...kinda cheesey
2007-03-23 19:23:58 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋