finally it came, the hearts on the letters, my head on his shoulder, my hand in his. Finally it came, the look of compainionship, the jump of my heart, the hugs that he gives.
Finally it came, the feel of his touch, the slower we dance, the more that I want. Finally it came, the look of his smiles, the feel of his presence, the pure happiness. Finally it came, but all to soon it will leave once again...
2007-03-23 12:04:49 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Its sweet. The last part makes me a little sad. Its a lot more than words on paper.
2007-03-23 12:12:05 · answer #1 · answered by Shivanie R 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thats hot I like that, it's like when something that you finally want-comes then by the time you try to enjoy it, it later becomes a memory that we often ask ourselves what is just a dream>
You got talent keep it up yea come to think of it i really like it
2007-03-23 19:09:25 · answer #2 · answered by Sky 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that's Very good.. i like it. soo true is all i have to say.. that's My outlook on life.. if you have something good you have to assume it will end... which you Shouldn't do.. but it's what you do.. you worry because you are SO happy. that poem is very Real and insightful.. a poem almost everyone can relate to. very good.
2007-03-23 19:10:30 · answer #3 · answered by coolio 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like this alot girl u a poet and dont even know it. great work and keep on doing this your good:)
2007-03-23 19:09:25 · answer #4 · answered by virgo2207 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cute... it's just a bit short though.. I appreciate people who have these kind of talent.. keep it up girl..
2007-03-23 19:39:02 · answer #5 · answered by jami... 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh its wonderful, not to long but very detailed your very good...any more
2007-03-23 19:08:53 · answer #6 · answered by tripp j 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
love the repetition
2007-03-23 19:09:44 · answer #7 · answered by Lollipop 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
very nice, i liked it a lot
2007-03-23 19:09:19 · answer #8 · answered by Wings Fan! 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's cute.
2007-03-23 19:08:34 · answer #9 · answered by jen. 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
it ok âº
2007-03-23 19:08:32 · answer #10 · answered by Iluvchocolate 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋