Im leaving you behind
without so much as a goodbye.
All my deams have gone.
Thats all we were. A dream.
To decieve my mind
would be so nice.
Although the taste of lust
is so very sweet.
Im sorry love.
I ruined it all.
We could have been
so much more.
Im constantly running.
Never stopping to catch my breath.
Running with someone,
then running away.
The habits of my ancestors
flow in my blood.
Never holding on.
Never letting go.
2007-03-22 04:38:25 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
and what if you were wrong?
2007-03-22 04:43:41 · answer #1 · answered by Immortal 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
heres my opinion and im a real poet
compared to me thats wack all yall know it
it just should never been writtin
now listen to what im spittin
if you were serious about that you musta been kiddin
cause that was so emo
please h0e
my poems give you goose bumps and make you quiver
this poem just makes me say cry me a river
thank you thank you
2007-03-22 11:52:33 · answer #2 · answered by blunt 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow, thats good! Did you write that on your own? If your a good singer you could make that into a song! good luck!
2007-03-22 11:41:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
from a fellow poet, i think that this is a very good poem very beautiful, brought me to tears
2007-03-22 11:44:23 · answer #4 · answered by sweethyedreamer213 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You sound lonely and depressed...
2007-03-22 11:41:56 · answer #5 · answered by Maureen B 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
VERY GOOD JOB!
2007-03-22 11:43:18 · answer #6 · answered by Goodfellar 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
that is REALLY good!! honest!!!
2007-03-22 11:50:05 · answer #7 · answered by eve j 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋