do you like?

Question

I wonder.

I wonder when you’ll stare into
my eyes and see how much I care for you.

I wonder when you’ll kiss my lips
to see how much I desire you.

I wonder when you’ll take my hand to see
how much I want you.

I wonder when you’ll hold me close to
see how much I need you.

I wonder when you’ll hear my
heartbeat to see that your heart beat matches
mine.

I wonder when you’ll see how much I care for
you and that you mean everything to me.

These are all the things I wonder, holding on to my faith,
I hope when you realize my love for you it won’t be too late.

thanks for your feedbacks. i thought no one would like it but i guess i was wrong. smile. this isn't really for anyone. i'm at school onm my lunch period right now, and something came to mind and i wrote it. it's from my heart because there are really people out there who don't realize the love that other people have for them. instead those people just get hurt or hurt others. i'm a very deep person. whenever i write poems i make it so that my audience knows that i feel the poem and that it's from my heart. if i just write it without meaning then i know my audience will feel it. if you want to continue to read poems of mine go to google. then type in poetry.com. then enter my name. kimone march. and read on. hope you like those you read if you read them. i love poetry and i feel good when i can make a connection with the people who read it. i'll continue to write poems. and as i always say" i write becasue this is my gift from the man above". thank you for reading.

there is a section in my details that says. if i write it without meanig then i know my audience will feel it. sorry that's the other waya round. then i know my audience won't feel it.

my lucky guy lives all the way in a different country. but it works out. it's going good so far.this is not for him though.

Answer 1

its good

Answer 2

What do you want me to say?? It´s good. As long as it´s from the heart, it´s good. However, as a man, I could be a better poet than Robert Frost and I will still be the scary man with a poem. You have to realize that some people don´t want to hear poetry. Now, I realize ALL you asked is what I think. So, the answer is it is good. Some people are open to poetry, others, look like they are confused if something rhymes. If that is for a bf, then it is great. He, and I, would DEFINITELY appreciate somebody who went out of their way to write us a poem. However, if I wrote the very SAME poem and gave it to 10 women. Probably 7-9 (depending on how I read it) will not like it, and think there are some ulterior motives behind the ´recital´. Maybe 2 would think the poem had a nice ring to it. And maybe one would really like it. That tells me that there is probably more than 90% of the population that isn´t going to be feeling my poetry. That´s why things like that, are usually kept to themselves. It is personal, and from the heart, meaning that it is best between two people. Love and Respect; and ¡¡¡Have a nice day, It´s beautiful outside!!!

Answer 3

Your poem reached the depths of my soul, my mind , and my heart.

As I read I heard music. Voices of angels danced on your every word.

You are a wonder, keep writing. You are a gift to us all.

I fell in love with you - your the words.

It would certainly be a lucky guy if the poem were for him.

This poem should be read at every wedding

Answer 4

very few people don't like good poetry
very very good
you should be plublished
never thiink your poems aren't good bc they're an extension of your heart, mind soul and they can be shared with the world if you choose..
God Bless

Answer 5

that really is amazing!!!!

I mean, I am in a band and we write songs that we play out all the time, but that is really, really good.

touches home i guess because im going through something in a relationship and that touches me.

keep it up!!!

Answer 6

thats really good u should submit it 2 www.poetry.com n they will publish it in a book n you'll be partially famous :-) also, providing they select ur poem which I know they will u have the chance 2 win 10,000 dollars :-)

Answer 7

I really love ur poem. It shows u actually sit down and write.

Answer 8

it sounds gr8, i think im gonna convert this poem into a song, do u care if i do, just don't patent it, so i can win regalies, just kidding, well of the 2nd course, ur way so inspirating, its a cute poem

Answer 9

Not bad. If you really want a challenge, try and form this poem into a villanelle.

Answer 10

omg, first the personal emails now your taking it public? how far are you going to go with this infatuation with me?

naw, i'm just kidden.. it's a good one, and i usually just pass up the poems.

Answer 11

Well if you need some body i m there for you n also its good