i'm on a poem kick... check it out please.. what do you think?

Question

baby girl, don't cry
sorry i ran away
i'll see you again, i promise
i just couldn't stay
you're my sister
and you know i love you
you're my tator bug
my pride and joy too
i know that you're young
and don't know why i'm gone
but i'll be back
and i know that you're strong
don't cry over me
you're a big girl
you're baby
my reason in this world
you'll see me again
and this i swear
anytime you need me
i'll make my way there
i'm not gone forever
and i never will be
call me anytime
i'll always be sissy
taylor paige
i know i'm not there
but just because i'm gone
doesn't mean i don't care
i know you miss me
and i miss you too
but baby girl remember
i will always love you

Answer 1

It sounds more like a letter then a poem to me. I'm just not into the whole freeform style. I'm sure whoever you're writing this to will love it.