~The sweet, rustic smell of the rain,
Fills my nose, my head, and my brain.
The springtime showers soak my dress,
and toes tingle with a grassy caress.
The beauty of this day is lost to me,
As the deaf man hears not the melody.
For all Nature's wonders seem so dim,
When I am here, standing next to him~.
2007-03-21 08:22:56 · 24 answers · asked by G?ld?n ang?l 5 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
man u:yes I do write Poems..
2007-03-21 09:09:43 · update #1
I really enjoyed reading this poem. The ryme sceme is goes very nicely although I do not usually enjoy ryme scemed poems. However, this poem really touched me and I really enjoyed it.
2007-03-21 08:29:29 · answer #1 · answered by s..... 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10
2007-03-21 08:26:31 · answer #2 · answered by MissGal 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5 out of 10
2007-03-21 08:26:25 · answer #3 · answered by Goldman 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7/10
2007-03-21 08:27:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a 10. It's nice. It rhymes. It makes me tingle. But what happens to the deaf man. Where did he go in the last two lines. Don't leave me guessing!
2007-03-21 08:26:25 · answer #5 · answered by Big Momma Carnivore 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well from 0 to 10 i would go with a 8, nice poem go to a contest web pg and they rate your poems to .
2007-03-21 08:33:09 · answer #6 · answered by devenylee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8 out of 10 for normall people but since its coming from u 10 out of 10( i guess lol).. and no silly. why would i stalk to you ?
im just couris thats all.. u know im majoring finance/business.. i got know where best places for business in this world. maybe one day we'll make millions together manal. WHO KNOWS !!:P maybe if u become a millionaire Ronladnio or whatever his name is will marry you
2007-03-21 08:51:18 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful- not so hot about the brain maybe veins but i like it! 8 out of 10
2007-03-21 08:28:59 · answer #8 · answered by missi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love your poem very sweet 10 from 10
listen to this
Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. Love is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails.
2007-03-21 09:32:57 · answer #9 · answered by micho 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Hmph not bad way better than I thought and get an standing ovation in my opinion
2007-03-21 08:29:20 · answer #10 · answered by spiritualism0 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋