daddy you're missing
where did you go
i see you in person
but that person i don't know
you use to love me
and call me your princess
i guess your parenting
went on a permanent recess
why don't you love me
what did i do
am i the one to blame
or should i blame you
i've done so much
and you've missed it all
is it too much to ask
for you to give me a call
you're my daddy
you always will be
can't you accept
that you made me
i smile through tears
and laugh through pain
i just want my daddy
to see him again
good bye daddy
you'll never be here
i see you in person
but i just see my fear
open your eyes
see who i am
be a real father
turn into a man
2007-03-21 07:50:36 · 11 answers · asked by Back*To*Me 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
publish???? naw, i write all the time and it's just a way to pass time
2007-03-21 07:55:24 · update #1
Wow the poem is great. You have a real talent to be able to rightlike that. Theres a lot of emotion behind it. Good Job.
2007-03-21 07:55:04 · answer #1 · answered by Skyline 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! I have a little advice but it in Chicken soup for the teenage soul book! I dont have the adress but check it out on the internet. It's a great poem and I'd bet they would feature it! GOOD LUCK!
2007-03-21 10:19:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a very good poem. It isn't your fault that your Daddy left. I'm sure it left you quite wounded. I hope you can forgive him and find inner healing. There is a Father in heaven that promises to never leave you or forsake you. Call out to Him and let Jesus heal your wounds.
2007-03-21 08:21:00 · answer #3 · answered by ruby 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-02 12:44:16 · answer #4 · answered by derverger 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to be honest your quit good at it!... finally someone who knows poetry and not just words... one way or the other you where able to transmit the message and the feeling behind the message... you should publish it! but remember... if you loose that person that inspires you, your poems will be nothing more than just words!
2007-03-21 08:00:45 · answer #5 · answered by Wenke_91 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was a good poem you wrote off the top of your head.
2007-03-21 08:50:50 · answer #6 · answered by Kasia H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I take you father has left you, againest his will or left on his own?
Your father will always love you, I don't know what has gone on in your life but you sound betrayed or mislead.
Maybe add, I miss you daddy, come home.
2007-03-21 07:56:00 · answer #7 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem. I think he will call you once he reads it.
2007-03-21 07:53:23 · answer #8 · answered by kathyw 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that's amazing you should publish it.
2007-03-21 07:54:23 · answer #9 · answered by Noree 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow, that's really good! really good!!! especially just off the top of your head! cudo's!
2007-03-21 08:20:39 · answer #10 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋